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At your feet

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How does it feel?
The world at your feet
The rain of accomplishment
Upon your shoulders

No pressure, no stress
Like the gentle rain,
creating it's beauty

Breathe that sweet air;
The potential is yours

It's the realization
Of what joy is
It's the understanding
Of what is accomplished
For :icongoldengirls:

Hope you like it

Edit: I edited this poem to make it sound better. I think it does. Hehehe, an old gift poem. :meow: I remember the days I used to do those. :)
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GoldenGirls's avatar
OMG OMFG!!! it's sooooooooooooo perfectly perfect!!!!
i love the rain! sweet air!! :glomp:
if i could add it to my faves again, i would :hug:
omg omg omg
you have no idea how perfect it is!!
xxxxxx