literature

Domestic

Deviation Actions

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Literature Text

Her lashes were crinkled feathers,
brushing up against her bruised skin;
violet and red speckles.

The scars on her body
were translucent lines
making patterns of
regret and bitterness.

Earthquakes were running
through her fingers.
The last line was my attempt at trying to take the idea of her hands shaking and writing that in a creative way...I hope it worked. This poem is about domestic abuse. Can be to a child, but in my mind I was thinking more of a husband abusing his wife.

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Theme: The Perfect Crime
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londonrey's avatar
Oh, perfect. I adore this one, the imagery is just right, to show the pain, but in a way that doesn't detract from the message. The first stanza is absolutely gorgeous, and so well written! I love the last stanza as well. (: