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Invisible Ink

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Forgive me, I must inhale
with my ribbon lungs,
fly with my tea leaf appendages.

Love, you are my bane,
twisted cinnamon snogs
against cannabis fragrance.

Little tangles in our hair,
bare palms dreaming,
empty shot glasses whistling.

We are unspoken wanton,
but there is little to do
and too much to say.

I mush my little toes
against the mud and hear
the memories you don't remember.
We shouldn't, but we would if we could and darling there's a song in my heart where the memories lie (to rest until it is forgotten). Mix of truth and imagery.
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What I find that I love about this piece most is the unusual word choice and the imagery that those words evoke when one reads this piece. I love the way the piece rhymes from line to line and flows from one idea to one imagery seamlessly. The unusual imagery that makes the reader have flash backs to one childhood days. when the world was still new that one seem to just forget and can't remember but should take the time to remember one again and be that child one again and see the brave new world that the child see where is any thing is possible.