literature

Painting of life

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My painting weeps colors
sorrow and happiness
dark and light

It drips
off the canvas
onto my fingers

Red and orange
like the sunset color
of a warm beating heart

Delicate fingers painted
on the canvas wall
every detail matched
with every branch and line

Blue and black
sorrow and distress
dripping down
down

Colors of the rainbow
of the world
of the cosmos

Sapphires, diamonds
rubies and emeralds
fall out of my eyes
from the old and new colors
painted

Your eyes seep of wonder
and knowledge

I grasp your hands
and together
we become

the symbiotic painting of life
:)

Old version:

My painting cries colors
sorrow and happiness
darkness and light

It's depth is dripping
off the canvas
onto my fingers

Red and orange
like sunset
and a warm kiss


Delicate fingers painted
on the canvas wall
every detail matched
with every branch and line

Blue and black
sorrow and distress
dripping out
dripping down

Colors of the cosmos
of the rainbow
of the world
of life
of love
of beauty


Sapphires, diamonds
rubies and emeralds
fall out of my eyes
from the old and new colors
painted

Your eyes seep of wonder
and knowledge
I grasp your hands
and together
we become
the painting of life
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dope. i like your style. :)