literature

Souls

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Literature Text

Every night,
my soul is replaced
with a new one;
it's translucent,
bubble like
when it passes through me.

It's without form,
smooth feeling,
but frigid to the touch.

A ghostly glow,
makes me feel cold
and temporarily alone,
till my soul is replaced.

Souls pass through me,
nightly.


I change so much.
Probably sounds better when I'm sleepy... I'm sleepy now and I came up with this last night. Please feel free to suggest a way to improve it.

Here: [link] :excited:

(The ending is still bothering me... I tweaked it... not 100% satisfied.)
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platinummyr's avatar
I'm not really satisfied with that ending either :| I can't think why though/